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General!ChinaXreader The most beautiful of all P5

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China’s POV

I walked up to the soldier who was still on the ground. He looked up at me through his arms and swiftly got up when he recognized me. “I don’t need anyone causing trouble in my camp aru” I told him.

“Sorry…” the soldier said. Was it just me or did his voice sound strangely like a girl’s. The soldier continued, “Uh…uh I uh mean I’m sorry you had to see that but uh *he punches my arm* you know how it is when you get those manly urges, and you just gotta kill something, fix things, cook outdoors….” His voice seemed to have lowered very quickly.

‘Ok this guy is very strange aru.’ I think to myself and then I say “What’s your name, aru?”

Reader chan’s POV

When you first saw the general you couldn’t help but take in his looks He had long brown hair that was tide back into a pony tail and honey brown eyes. ‘ya know he’s pretty handsome……wait, did he just ask me for my name? Sh*t! Why didn’t I think of that before I came here?’ you think to yourself. “Uh…uh I uh…”

“Your commanding officer just asked you a question!” Chi-fu said ‘oh great this guy again’ you think.

“I’ve got a name *scoff* and it’s a boy’s name too.” ‘WTF brain why did you make me say that? Of course they think I have a boy’s name.’


“Gilbert? ‘ow bout Gilbert?” Francis spoke up from behind you

“His name is Gilbert” You whisper back nodding to one of the guys that you tried to befriend earlier.

“I didn’t ask for his name. I asked for yours aru.”

“Try...Uh ah, ah chu.” Francis suggested

“Achoo.”

“Achoo?”

“Gazunthiet (I have no idea how to spell that) Ahaha I kill myself.”

“Francis…” you scold him.

“Francis?”

“No...!”

“Then what is it aru?!”

“Antonio. Antonio was my best friend growing up!” Francis said

“It’s Antonio.”

“Antonio?”

“Of course Antonio did steal my girlf-“ You covered his mouth before he could say anything else.

“Yes. My name is Antonio.”

“Let me see your conscription notice aru.” The General said. You took it out and handed it to him. “(Last name) (Father’s name). The (L/n) (Father’s name)?”

“I didn’t know he had a son.” Chi-fu added.

“um..h-he doesn’t talk about me much.” You say and then try to hawk-a-loogie….it didn’t end well.

“I can see why. The boy’s an absolute lunatic.” Chi-fu said. Everyone snickered at this.

The General, whom you read that his name was Yao Wang, began to address everyone “Ok gentlemen, thanks to your new friend, Antonio, you will spend tonight picking up every single grain of rice aru. And tomorrow, the real work begins aru.” Then he walked back into his tent.

Everyone sneered at you. The three that you tried to befriend earlier pantomimed beating you up. “You know, we ‘ave to work on your people skills.” Francis said.
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Wahh please dont kill me! im sorry that its short. I just have a lot of other stuff going on this week so i couldnt write that much. But anyway here you go~

Can you guess who im going to make ling, yao, and Chin-po be? I bet you cant~

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Lovingallisposible's avatar
Its a great idea for a reader insert, but you're literally stating what happened in the movie. That's unoriginal and in a way copyright Infringement.

Its also not an reader insert anymore, because you're just replacing names.